"The essays look great. You haven't changed the originality of my thoughts, but you've presented them so much more clearly. Thanks for your help." —Ganesh R.
The Crucial Difference
Gaining admission to a top university or grad‐school program requires more than just strong grades and test scores. Demonstrated critical thinking and communication skills are just as important. That's why your admissions essays and personal statements can make the crucial difference between acceptance and rejection.
I'm a professional admissions essay editor, and I'll help you make the strongest possible case for your admission, with clear, concise, powerful essays. I have more than 20 years of experience, helping hundreds of applicants gain admission to virtually every leading university and grad-school program (including full and part-time MBA, LAW, MED, PharmD and other professional programs). I can help improve your chances significantly by:
Highlighting your qualifications to demonstrate what makes you a desirable candidate for next year's entering class
Enhancing the clarity and readability of your essays by making stronger word choices and rewriting phrases, sentences, and paragraphs
Improving the logical organization of your material
Minimizing the impact of negative elements in your background
Eliminating extraneous detail, to show the admissions committee that you're a focused, clear-thinking candidate
Ensuring flawless punctuation and grammar
FREE sample edit, NO-SURPRISES pricing
Email me your draft(s) as file attachments. I will edit a brief sample at no charge to show you what I can do for you. I recommend that you also ask for a sample edit from the other editors you're considering; it's the only way to make sure they can deliver what they claim. I will also quote the exact fee before work begins: no surprises.
After you approve my sample edit, I'll complete the work on your essay(s) within 24 hours for up to 1000 words. More than 1000 words may take up to 48 hours, depending on current workload. If, after you receive your edited file(s), you need to make any final minor changes, you're welcome to send them for polishing at no extra charge.
Maximize your chances of admission to the college or grad-school program of your choice.
Go to this link—www.davebolick.com/academic/admissionsessays.pdf—for more information, or call me at 510-601-9554 (NO CHARGE for phone consultations).
My service is absolutely confidential, and I don't use employees or sub-contractors. I alone will see and work on your essays.
Improve your chances
Call or write to learn more about how I can help you improve your chances of admission to the program of your choice.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Dave Bolick, admissions consultant
This year, every top program will receive thousands of applications for a limited number of spaces. Your admissions essays are your last best chance to convince them to give one of those valuable spaces to you. Make the most of the opportunity—call or email me to learn more.
"Dave, thanks very much for the great work on my admissions essays.
This is exactly what I was trying to say. You brought out all the most important points perfectly."
"Thank you very much for your help. This looks great. I'll get back to you soon about my other essays and letters of recommendation." —Janusz P.
"The edited version is great! I will recommend you to all of my friends, and I will be in touch next year when my daughter is applying to college." —Margaret M.